I don't know why.
I think having students zoom in on one moment can feel tricky.
I start the school year off having them write stories focusing on what they know and care about. I feel like the focus in K in September and October is helpings students create parts to a page that connect. Making pictures and words that connect. We are also teaching so many things about the procedure and process of writing time too.
Now, I want them to pick just one part and zoom in on it to make a story.
Last year, I taught small moments in the spring and I found the kids really got it. I think in the past because kids may have struggled with the zooming in part that I just decided...they don't get it...it's to hard for little kids, let's move on. I learned from last years class how to get them to get it!
This year, I decided to start Small Moments now and I am glad I did! When I told the class we would be learning how to write a Small Moment stories, it gave a whole new energy to the workshop time. I started by reading Roller Coaster by Marla Frazee.
What I like about this mentor text is that Marla could have wrote about all of the things that she did at the amazement part but instead of writing an all about the park she zoomed in on just the roller coaster ride. Kindergartner's kids get that. I think the idea of sticking to one idea and spreading that moment across the pages can be difficult for k so this book is the perfect example.
We read lots of books that had parts you could Zoom in on too. I loved using Donald Crews books
This story has many moments but we ZOOMED in on the ferris wheel part and talked about how that could be the small moment story.
I loved this book! This lead to a great discussion about putting sounds in our writing and looking carefully at the illustrations.
We talked about the part in the story when Sophie gets very angry. This was a great example of showing rather then just telling.
Next step we wrote a class Small Moment Story
Some of Our Small Moments
The Bamboo Shoot
After reading Roller Coaster a lot of students wrote stories about being on rides. This is a great example of stretching out you story into a small moment. The illustrations are very detailed for kindergarten. I love that she using sounds words in her writing.
We go to the Bamboo Shoot ride many people were in line.
Shhhhhhhhhhh
up up up
We tell my mom to close her eyes to sleep then we tell her to open them. (a little confusing but she explained how they were teasing their mom on the ride)
We go back in line The End
Pinkie PieThis child was writing a many moments story so during the conference I had her pick the most important part of her many moments and zoom in on that. I just love the illustrations!!!
Pinkie Pie
I love Pinkie Pie
Pinkie Pie has blue eyes
She is the best my little pony because she eats candy.
It was our turn.
I looked in the bag. I saw my favorite animal.
I pulled it out.
Playing Soccer
This child struggled with how to zoom in. So on the back of his book I
made a little Circle map, we brainstormed things you do playing soccer.
On the side I made a Tree map of the first part of his moment and what
happened next.
Going To McDonald's
When this child first wrote this story he first put he looked in the bag. When we talked I suggested that he think about changing it to, I looked in the Happy Meal. Putting Happy Meal in his story, gives everyone a real clear picture in their minds.(this was shared with the class too) The class noticed that he did not tell what the animal was in his Happy Meal and they wanted to know. This was the perfect opportunity to introduce Spider legs to the class.
Going to Mc DonaldsIt was our turn.
I looked in the bag. I saw my favorite animal.
I pulled it out.
It was a good day
For these Small Moment stories I had students work on these little books below.
For these Small Moment stories I had students work on these little books below.























